I felt like this developed the concept of narrative in a music video as it allows the consumers to have two different halves of the music video, the artist and the story, giving them more to watch and to become emotionally involved in.
Also I studied the representation of the artist of several music videos. They tend to be represented as powerful and always having flash cars so for the artist of my music video I decided that he should look flash and impressive.


You need to be visual in your evaluation. Find music videos where the artist is part of the storyline. Take some time to bother to take stills from that example, and compare to some stills from your own video. THEN... you can explain the ways in which your product either develops or challenges forms and conventions... What you have here simply isn't enough.
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Again, great that you have responded to feedback Lee.
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